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if i should die before i wake ch.3
If I should die before I wake ch. 3
Johnny's POV:
My head, fuck! Where the fuck am i? Wait a minute, who in the fuck is holding me? Fuck! It hurts to even try and open my eyes. Ugh.
Narrator:
we flash back to the past as to let the point of views re-align.
We see our suicidal friend being carried like a very large child through Devi’s apartment building hallways. We now see how grotesquely thin he really is as the fabric of his clothing is being pulled down by gravity against his flesh. His protruding ribs and hips seem utterly haunting to even those apathetic to his situation. As he is being carted through Devi’s apartment door and lain on the couch we can see him try fruitlessly to regain consciousness.
Johnny’s POV:
Oh god, oh fuck, where am I? Am I in hell, true hell? Who is touching me? Fuck! Fuck! Fuck! I should've never gone there tonight. God, why didn't I wait. Fuck!
Narrator:
We now flash forward to where we last left off.
Normal-ish POV:
Devi and Tenna ran
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If I should die before I wake ch. 3

Johnny's POV:
My head, fuck! Where the fuck am i? Wait a minute, who in the fuck is holding me? Fuck! It hurts to even try and open my eyes. Ugh.

Narrator:
we flash back to the past as to let the point of views re-align.
We see our suicidal friend being carried like a very large child through Devi’s apartment building hallways. We now see how grotesquely thin he really is as the fabric of his clothing is being pulled down by gravity against his flesh. His protruding ribs and hips seem utterly haunting to even those apathetic to his situation. As he is being carted through Devi’s apartment door and lain on the couch we can see him try fruitlessly to regain consciousness.

Johnny’s POV:
Oh god, oh fuck, where am I? Am I in hell, true hell? Who is touching me? Fuck! Fuck! Fuck! I should've never gone there tonight. God, why didn't I wait. Fuck!

Narrator:
We now flash forward to where we last left off.

Normal-ish POV:
Devi and Tenna ran to the living room to investigate the cause of Johnny’s agonized screams. As they entered the room they see a red faced and crying Johnny curled in a ball on the floor. His pain ridden screams continued with him immobile on the floor hugging his knees to his abdomen. Clearly this was quite concerning to both Devi and Tenna. Not knowing what to do they first tried to console the screaming and crying  man. They lifted him up onto the couch only worsening his agony. Johnny tried despratly to open his eyes and tell where he was but the pain all over his body was far too much to complete this simple task.

Johnny's POV:
OH FUCK! OH GOD! FUCK, THIS PAIN. ID RATHER BE DEAD! FUCK!


Normal-ish POV:
“What is wrong with him!” Devi yelled to Tenna. Tenna not close to being qualified to give any medical advice simply yelled back “I don't know.”



To Be Contiued...
if i should die before i wake ch.3
I decided to continue this shitty story.
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ALoneAdventureArtist Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave :3
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TTTEFANS Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
happy birthday lars! ;P
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supersqish Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2016  Hobbyist
Thanks.
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JTHMFrAeK Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have given me favourite. Thank you for favourite.
You do good theengs. Keep eet up. 
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ZENO666 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016
Thanks for the fav in Nny :icongirplz:
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NeoNee101 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fave~ Make sure to check out some of my other work if you get the chance
^-^
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TTTEFANS Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
post your new haircut!~
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coconutcow Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oooo thank you so much for the favorite!
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supersqish Featured By Owner Edited Sep 26, 2015  Hobbyist
Whoa, bro thanks for the llama.
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coconutcow Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD No Problem Buddy
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